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As one of his many children, it is more than weird to see this little anecdote surface after so long. GB did not spare his critics in the pub, and its easily possible he may have been insulting to Carey and Carey was paying him back. I remember an evening in the French pub in the late 70s (when the soho bohemians were hardly distinguishable from down-n-outs) that was basically conversation as drunken boxing. Having said that, GB was of all the poets i've come across the most committed to poetry as the ultimate form of experience/arbiter of reality. Its impossible to describe how thrilling he made 'the business of living'. His Roman Poem III descibes an event that actually took place (he did build the birdcage in our garden). Its really about Byzantium (obv).

Roman Poem III

A SPARROW’S FEATHER

There was this empty birdcage in the garden.

And in it, to amuse myself, I had hung

pseudo-Oriental birds constructed of

glass and tin bits and paper, that squeaked sadly

as the wind sometimes disturbed them. Suspended

in melancholy disillusion they sang

of things that had never happened, and never

could in that cage of artificial existence.

The twittering of these instruments lamenting

their absent lives resembled threnodies

torn from a falling harp, till the cage filled with

engineered regret like moonshining cobwebs

as these constructions grieved over not existing.

The children fed them with flowers. A sudden gust

and without sound lifelessly one would die

scattered in scraps like debris. The wire doors

always hung open, against their improbable

transfiguration into, say, chaffinches

or even more colourful birds. Myself I found

the whole game charming, let alone the children.

And then one morning – I do not record a

matter of cosmic proportions, I assure you,

not an event to flutter the Volscian dovecotes –

there, askew among those constructed images

like a lost soul electing to die in Rome,

its feverish eye transfixed, both wings fractured,

lay – I assure you, Catullus – a young sparrow.

Not long for this world, so heavily breathing

one might have supposed this cage his destination

after labouring past seas and holy skies

whence, death not being known there, he had flown.

Of course, there was nothing to do. The children

brought breadcrumbs, brought water, brought tears in their

eyes perhaps to restore him, that shivering panic

of useless feathers, that tongue-tied little gossip,

that lying flyer. So there, among its gods

that moaned and whistled in a little wind,

flapping their paper anatomies like windmills,

wheeling and bowing dutifully to the

divine intervention of a child’s forefinger,

there, at rest and at peace among its monstrous

idols, the little bird died. And for my part,

I hope the whole unimportant affair is

quickly forgotten. The analogies are too trite.

Raffaella  Barker's avatar

As another of the off spring of George Barker, and the niece of the brilliant Allan Massie, and indeed the avenger of the ‘apparently still alive’ arrow, I’ve got to say this is all so great. These days critical language is often pretty milky and bland, and it’s excellent to read and remember all the above . Especially the savage pleasure we felt the evening we realised we could hunt down something that had stung our flesh when our hearts were hurting. That something was John Carey. I can’t recommend highly enough the sport of critic baiting to salve some of the many wounds of fresh grief. I had forgotten my mother had come out with the curse. Love that especially. My father’s poems, Elizabeth Smart’s novels, any novels, any poems, are not to everyone’s taste. That in no way reduces them. I’d say the fact that their shenanigans as well as their work are still being sifted through decades after their deaths suggests that they, more than John Carey have the edge. But then I would say that, wouldn’t I?

Thanks anyway and I can’t wait to read your Slightly Foxed piece.

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